Don't get any of this. They don't train the new recruit well and they are weak and dies. The MC sucks as a partner but the rookies should be better trained, including easier starting assignments. Then they ask him to spar with a tougher rookie? Author never watched nor read police/military stories.
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C'mon this is disgusting writing. I am done, good job making it so annoying. I really hate forced plot using cheap system method. Karma really? Lol, you're building some (minor) negative karma just writing this stuff.
Author made this another stupid forced system plot. No story progression nor MC drive that moves the story forward but a cheap system that dictates what MC does every f'in cheesy step of the way. What f'in cheap idiotic lazy f'in writing. Never have I seen such a blatant c*p method of moving the plot along, worse than other "systems".
Dear author, can you make the MC even dumber? Cause he is fucked up in the head, I see no sign of a gamer.
Not saying his strategy is good or bad BUT imagine if you're a strategist for a king and invoked a grand plan but the King says, well if you want us to listen you need to take a hit from our best knight with a greatsword and survive. This type of logic is dumbshit stupid. This is aside from him becoming "head" of family or not, he was just giving strategic advice for survival.
The story is a bit hollow, empty of any attachments to reader. The author failed to pull the reader in with a well woven storyline, where a reader can inject themselves into or get lost in it. Good start, but disappointing as it progressed.
It is a mess, author gave some odd "nerfs" to an OP MC. He can stop some of this from happening but for plot purposes the author drags on stupid repeated fights. Either have him slowly rise in power or make it OP, but this wishy washy method is odd and unsatisfying for the reader(s).
Memory lost or even hurting noble, they asked him to fight while they held a real sword against h...
Memory lost or even hurting noble, they asked him to fight while they held a real sword against his wooden sword. They started in private and public but get angry? He did not damage the nobility as one stated, that would be stupid, by witness account he just reacted. Meaning it is him vs their arrogance and pride nothing more.
AI or not, this is pretty bad. Art is c*p and the story is a copy paste with added shovel.
This is good
I like it
Yea, the MC feels useless. Author did a good job making an arrogant useless MC, while never allowing the reader any satisfaction of eliminating the bad guys. You got to give the reader something to chew on to keep on reading, this is abysmal.
So..... does the MC let everyone go? Again, survival instinct of a sunfish.
Poor translation, they speak as if they took 1 month of English class trying to ask for direction. Also the stupid MC with zero survival instinct is off-putting. Only saving grace is the art, it is well done.
Started off good, but then the cool dude came out flat... why couldn't he stay cool. Why did yah have to say something so stupid, not the fact it was cold hearted, just stupid. You know he can't just forget and act like nothing happened. Got another r*d character, great.
Not really into jumping back and forth from two historic points nor in game and out. It usually become a mess. Even this it feels like it is missing strong story foundation, tad boring.
Not sure what the author was expecting but his is boring as s*t.
Makes no sense the guild would charge the MC, even for plot purpose it was stupid. If you tryout in sports and you damage the equipment cause you're just good, it is no cost to person. It was the guilds fault for the way they place the equipment. Author is already giving dumb MC and people vibe.
Guessing if the author ever reveal it, MC has max luck stats.
This game has freakish experience point requirement for 1 f'in level. This is a grind fest game. Worse than Evercrack or Ultima Online.