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Death_Carniv
4 years ago

You really need to be lucky though... no one wants to reincarnate in an apocalypse.

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Really don't know why they all need to act like this? Like why not just make a small creater by stomping your foot atleast that would show your strong enough to be thier rather than act all cocky, he just basically wants to do dinker measuring contest... sigh and here I thought he'll be a good dude with all that power.

Hmm... the translation it's not bad, weird it might just have been the prolonge. The story isn't really that thrilling though, like really you've been alive for eons and might have lived multiple lifetimes and yet all you want to do is sacrifice everything you've achieved to correct some of your actions in one of your lifetimes? Now that's petty, really want to get that 100% I guess.

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Joe Henson
4 years ago

You have alot of hate on you dude. But your right the grammar does suck, this might be an old comic tho, wonder if random people can fix the grammar and post it again... really not sure how copy right works.

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These translations succcckkkk

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Atleast you acknowledged it... you went to heaven to early, you still needed to learn more about the world before actually living it... a hermit isolated focusing only in thier quest to accumulate power to break through into heaven would commonly fail but if one actually succeeds? Then it would be like a child attending collage, you would be thier equal in terms of knowledge or in your case power but that's it. everything else would be in your disadvantage.

Hmm... wonder how long it would take him to reach his current level if fate has not been playing to his rhythm... you'd be curious on either his special item has the ability to grant someone dominion over faith or if someone much stronger would be playing the role of puppetmaster.

Hmm... yup, honestly can't blame her, for what happened in that other timeline it wasn't her, as it was all experienced by "him" this is basically the killing of hittler before his rise Stereotype... but yeah she's an opportunistic bi***, who takes advantage of every she can but you can't blame her for that from we know it's in her nature, and  just look at her parents i would not be surprised on how they nurtured her, I've not studied psychology but atleast don't fault people for what they're about to do but for what they've actually done... that said I haven't experienced half the sh** his been through so I really can't say much, it's easy to speak in the perspective of forethought and omniscient but not in the here and now... but I'm still disappointed in him, his basically a g** who's meddling in petty mortal squabbles.... his a petty dude, no matter how you look at it, and that's from a guy who's been a loser for most of his life only now have seen some breathing room.

Hmm... the government involvement part... either people more accurately artist types are being influenced by each other and kept on rewriting the same things for profit or what not or thiers an unknown event happening in the land of silk and tea.

Hmm... "not respecting the heaven and not a worshiper of the earth?" Yeah I think that might be the reason he got fuc*** over... rather than change and improve as he reflects why his beloved pupils betrayed him in the end, he would rather go on a power trip not humbled by his foolish death because of his own hubris... there really is a fine line between arrogance and confidence. Sigh... all that power, experience and time, would be wasted... atleast his kind, without that triat, I would be disgusted on how a person like him survived and reached that peak in his future... well it could be that reason he died was also the reason he survived until that point, a natural selection as you will, but that would also mean that this part of his story should be redemption rather than a revenge trip, as he should realize the reason he fell... ths only way forward is complete tyranny or paragon no other way or else if would be another death.

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