i dont have anything against slow burns, i quiet like em but we r chapter 50+ in and all we got were 2 pabels of some kind of kiss or something. no real conversation or incidents or snything. it feels weird because everytime therese a tense scene it just ends without a bang. its edging but not in a good way, honestly. im not saying its because of the lack of sm** but the lack of actual interactions between ML and MC. kinda sad.
is it just me or is the artstyle a bit... inconsistent? like dont get me wrong, i love every version of it, its beautifully drawn, just irritates me a tiny bit lol
@Haruki its ok, i wasnt trying to bash on omegaverse but its just a fact there r many stories solemnly written to be smutty in that alpha omega dynamics. thats why i call it fastfood sm** stories. i do LOVE bl. but also i have to say, yes, her body is oversexualized but if we r honest, nearly all of the ml in bl r too. so just because they r men, packed to the max to be sexually attractive, doesnt mean its better than an over sexualized woman. so it would be pretty double standard of me to judge that here if u get me
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@thismiss Still the body to face ratio is really out of the place tbh the story is good bu...
ok but did anyone else saw the bodyguard smiling gently at the little happy painter twink boy? atp i rly wished for a sidecharacter ship PLS im so tired of mc
i rly dont want to be a hater but objectively this story is really poorly written imo. based on basic known emotional responses to actions it just makes no sense? the emperor did nothing, rly nothing that would made up for what he has done to rhe mc. we r talking about stuff like killing his mother, raiding his village, non sexual violence to a point where a snaps his bones, sexual violence & ra**, kidnapping, imprisonment PLUS he tried to kill him & the man he said he loves/wants (his brother) etc. like yea emperor daddy is freaking da** hot but just because he showed a little gentleness by NOT HURTING HIM (helloho?) or giving gifts etc. it still makes no sense mc falls for him. the developement and insight of mcs mind is rly not well written. he wants to flee on at all costs from his rapist, his loverboy frees him but ultimately he leaves him again for the black flag because of WHAT? stockholm syndrom at its finest? man, i rly wished there was a better/more sense makong plot for this story. :< sry for the rant, its just frustrating
idc i love the tension, i love the passion, i love seeing them together & its a million times better than most of the alpha/omega verse fastfood sm** stories. i said what i said 💅🎀
(also girlies "chub" body features get me like 🫦💦)