Okay concept, but it was hurt by its length. The whole focus was on "does he just love me because I'm the only omega," but we never actually see them develop a relationship at all. It felt like being A/O was literally the only foundation for the relationship as the reader. The story would have been better served if it was just regular omegaverse with a reluctant omega like Kiraide Isasete. Then the story could have spent more time on the characters instead of the world building and sister. It needed another volume if it was going to do this story and not have the relationship be an afterthought.
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Honestly, it's pretty bad. The beginning is really awful. The world isn't meaningfully set up, none of the characters are fleshed out, and there's not really a plot. It's not until near the end of S1 that it stops being a collection if disconnected s** scenes.
SPOILERS: This story also has an SA/trauma problem. Not because it's present; I've seen r*pe used as a meaningful story beat. The problem is the inconsistency. It's made very clear that the twins sexually torture the MC for days, yet he's fine with them basically throughout the rest of the story. But he's horrified when other characters try to force him into s** acts and traumatized by similar behavour from the Doctor.
S2 tries to have a plot, but a lot of the story beats happen outside of the reader's perspective and there's not enough connective tissue. Stuff just happens. And again, the main threat always comes down to SA. The ending is a big nothing burger too as they basically return to the status quo from the start of S2 where MC is being passed around on a schedule.
SPOILERS: This story also has an SA/trauma problem. Not because it's present; I've seen r*pe used as a meaningful story beat. The problem is the inconsistency. It's made very clear that the twins sexually torture the MC for days, yet he's fine with them basically throughout the rest of the story. But he's horrified when other characters try to force him into s** acts and traumatized by similar behavour from the Doctor.
S2 tries to have a plot, but a lot of the story beats happen outside of the reader's perspective and there's not enough connective tissue. Stuff just happens. And again, the main threat always comes down to SA. The ending is a big nothing burger too as they basically return to the status quo from the start of S2 where MC is being passed around on a schedule.
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Way longer than it needed to be and it kept stretching out the same drama, but overall a cute and fun light story. Bad case of same face syndrome, so it's a bit tricky to distinguish the characters. Great at articulating a smutty scene though.
Kinda bad
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I'm not bothered about who was end game on principle, but I do think it trivializes "fated mates" as a concept. Other stories (manga) I've read about rejecting them is really huge and meaningful, even life threatening. I also found Jeongwu really unlikable. He instantly jumped to calling MC a wh*** omega when things weren't going his way and that wasn't justified at all.
Characters all felt really weak overall and the corporate side of the plot felt really tacked on.
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My g**, that was not an enjoyable read. Author notes say "immature love" was the intended portrayal, which I could see as inspiration, but by the end of season 2 the poor choices every character was making were just so grating. There was no growth as people at all unfortunately. It's just a really frustratingg read and there's basically no romance in it at all. There's justa frustrating plot and lots of uncomfortable seeming f*cking.
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Ooof, that was a struggle. Heavy miscommunication plot with a chronic over thinker which leads into a really controlling relationship. MC is dumb as a bag of rocks which is how he's so happy despite his boyfriend being insane. The cute moments felt cute enough, but his airheaded demeanor just meant it was all clouded in an unsettling undercurrent. Nothing gets resolved except their romance.